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Post by Lavender Brown on Aug 25, 2007 9:24:43 GMT -5
Name:Lavender Brown
Age:16
Year:6th
House:gryffindor
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Personality: lavender loves to giggle and have fun. she loves her friends and is in gryffindor. she is a kind and lovimd person. she love chames and to learn new thing. she is a great friend. and will do any thing for her friends. she cares so much for anmals. she has a cat that she loves so much.
RP Sample: as lavender walk to her room she ran into harry.they stared talking about the next D.A. meeting. they would be lerning new spells. lavender could not whet to the meeting.as she start to her room to do some studying for O.W.L.S. she saw ron and they stared to talk. she liked ron alot and she was glad she was dateing him. they talked about how snape was so mean to them in class. then lavender did so thing she never now she would she kiss ron on the lips and he kiss her back. she loved being a gryffindor.
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Post by Faith McGreggor on Aug 25, 2007 22:12:46 GMT -5
DeniedI'm sorry, but I cannot accept this profile. Here are the things you need to fix.- Personality needs to be longer. Must be at least ten sentences.
- RP sample is very poorly done. There are no capitals, an many gramaical mistakes.
- You have not filled out all fields of this application. All feilds are manditory.
- Rp Sample must be at least two paragraphs. (Ten sentences.)
Please PM me once you have fixed these problems, and I will check it over. To take the role of a cannon character, you must be responsible, a good role player, and know who you are dealing with.
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