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Post by Lavender Brown on Aug 3, 2007 13:27:21 GMT -5
Name:luna lovegood
Age:15
Year:5th
House:Ravenclaw
Looks:long blond hair and blue eyes
Personality: i am nice like to read. i like to make friends. i am kind and very smart and very shy people think i am crazy but iam not. i am part of the DA it is fun aome thime but is a lot of work. i love to take test and help people.
RP Sample:as luna was waling down the hall to her class. She saw ginny and she said hi to ginny. ginny said hi back and they stared to talk and the went to ther class together. they were really good friends.
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Post by Kale Andrea Mathews on Aug 7, 2007 19:36:27 GMT -5
I'm sorry. I cannot accept this application. It is not apropriate. You were to write in third person format, not first. Also, those are not paragraphs. thirdly, we already have a Luna Lovegood. Nor have you posted in I agree, not to mention your RP sample is very bad. You god modded, and it was not long enough.
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